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"Overall this story was very well written and never strayed away from the plot. This story was vividly written for readers to be able to envision the events that were taking place with each character. The author wrote this story for readers to truly feel the feelings that the characters were going through. There is mystery that keeps the readers wanting more. Readers will try to make their own assumptions of what will happen to each character. This gives a supernatural appeal as well and gives you a creepy outlook on the medium. The author thoroughly wrote this chapter very well and I would recommend this story to anyone who enjoys mystery/suspense."
Kept me on my toes
"This story kept me enthralled to the very end. I wanted to know more. The emotion and description in every paragraph was fantastic. I thoroughly enjoyed both the writing style and the plot line itself. The ending left me wanting more. Definitely read this story."
A Riveting Thriller
"From the very start, it is easy to get swept up in this chilling story. The reluctant protagonist, Mark, and his friends each read as distinct personalities with a longstanding friendship that only supports the constant rounds of peer pressure. Mark's discomfort and restlessness continue to build, carrying the tension right through the surprising revelation, and up to the final line of the piece. It would have been nice to see a few more subtle hints to the past encounter between Mark and Terry. Why, given past events would Terry be so insistent? Wouldn't Shane remark on how he missed out the last the group went out? Either could have helped to build a little mystery, that made both Mark's fear and the final revelation more powerful. Aside from that and a few typos, this was very well done!"
