What is your opinion?
Excellent attempt
"It was an excellent attempt to write a clean thriller without the gore or graphic. The scenes were very detailed and the conversations were very natural. "
Fun read
"In only 25 chapters, you managed to tell a complete story that kept me going back for more! I enjoyed the premise, and the story structure of going back and forth between Henry and Rosie. It was also interesting, seeing Henry use Rosie, while Harvey uses Rose. It was a great way to keep track of who he was in each moment. I did find some grammar issues, with commas or not remembering to add a space after an ellipses. There were also quite a few chapters where you wrote Henry or Harvey's name, and you meant to write about the other. Both issues are easily fixable, and something you could probably fix quickly. It was a good story! I was unsure about the luck of it all, but as it reached a conclusion, it made more sense that he was just lucky once or twice. You dove into a stalker's mind, as well as the victim, and while there wasn't anything really gory or too violent written in detail, I can see where you were going."
The Inexpected 2.0
"Interesting story, kept my intrigue to the end"
