What is your opinion?
Beautifully written
"So far I am enjoying this book! It mixes fantasy and horror well, though the introduction to the horror aspect is very sudden. (I should have known, it was written in the blurb😅) The language reads well, and it is very easy to understand. The chapters are a tad too long though, but it's nothing serious. There are several scenes of head hopping. I do not know if that is your writing style, as it doesn't really affect the plot, but it does read weird to me. In conclusion, the book is wonderful. I am enjoying the plot, the introduction of magic and the suspense you created around the Male lead. I can't wait for the next update!"
Successful
"Hello. I liked your book. It was a good set-up. I thought I would be a little bored after the first chapter, but then the chapters got better. Of course, I would have liked a lot more action and romance. I love that you wrote the book in detail. It's like I'm there and I see it with my own eyes. The chapters were a little long, sometimes I got bored while reading, you could keep it shorter and the chapters of the book would be more. But you should keep writing, you are good at it. If you have time, can you evaluate my first experience "Healer" book? Thank you for your time. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/1014093"
