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Afraid

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Summary

I looked at him suddenly afraid for my life

Genre
Horror,Other
Author
Empty
Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Beginning

The Beginning

Chapter One

It was a dark and rainy night when I got kidnapped.

I guess I should tell you how it happened.

June 28, 2008 Saturday 10pm

I logged into my phone to play some music as I walked home from the library. I got a text on my phone making me have to stop walking and look down.

Mom: Where are you?!

Me: Was helping the librarian clean up… im almost home, calm down

Mom: Ok ok but hurry up or I will let Carl eat your dinner ;)

Me : I’m comingggggggg

Mom: ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶

I laughed and started walking again blasting my music in my ears as I walked. I was almost home when I bumped into someone and tripped. My headphones were pulled out of my head and I tucked them into my pocket. I realized they had me by the waist so I stood up quickly. “I’m sorry, are you ok?” they asked, turning to look at me. I looked at them to see who they were realizing they were my age. “Oh yeah I’m ok sorry for bumping into you” I said calmly “No it’s totally fine, It was my fault” he said chuckling. “Well I have to go, I have school tomorrow”

He nodded and started to walk away.

I headed into the house and walked into my room and got ready for bed. I went to search through all of the pockets of the clothes I was just wearing to get everything when I realized…

Where was my phone?!?!?!

Let Empty know what you thought about this chapter!
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author

good start it's seems thriller waiting for next chap😅

3 years
author

great start! you pulled me in right away. i would recommend a little longer chapter :)

3 years
author

no dm/vm here

3 years

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