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Watch and pray

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Summary

There are lives depending on the decision you take. Instincts,moves, steps, journeys.... Be deep,be in thoughts,be bold,be clean. Life deserves more than you offer.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Discern and Yield

Now let me tell you a story.......


The sky was bright that night,

faded colours that covers the errors,

the children sat at the Grandma's feet,

waiting to hear the words that are mystery,


"Close your eyes Ella" grandma said.

With a broad smile, Ella closed her eyes.

"So,Ella, stay calm and tell the stars what you wish for"

The little girl wished,

she wants the mystery be revealed,

and to her alone. "Already done Mama"

"Juan,close your eyes and make a wish"

Well,he did. And wished he can make memories,

Memories of this spectacular night grandma wants to tell a story. "Done Mama"

Others were patiently waiting for their turn,the wait was obvious. "Alright everyone make a wish"

"Who offends a child?" grandma thought.


Now let me tell you a story.......

The sky was bright that night,

faded colours that covers the errors,

Noises of thunders,as the children played round.

No one was aware of the storm coming so huge,

Except Ella,who saw a bright light and shivered,stood up and ran. Who knows if she was noticed.

The storm came leaving everyone unprepared.

It was a horrible moment for the little children,as everything turned out to be unseen. Grandma was nowhere to be found, Ella is gone too.Juan hid beneath his breath and looked to heaven once again,"let this be a spectacular memorable night"

"Fold your hands,go on your knees and make the wish"

Juan obeyed the voice and said"If God wills his children be saved,let the storm be calm"

And the storm was relieved of it's anger.


"You would have saved them if you didn't run" a voice spoke behind Ella's listening ears.


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