knottyknitter

Calgary Alberta Canada

I am pursuing my love of writing in my retirement years. I've completed two novels and am beginning work on a third.

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Moments

I enjoyed this little collection of poems, Excellent word choice, brings emotions to the surface. There were one or two little word errors, but nothing that detracted from the overall impact of each poem. Very well done.

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The wages of Sin

An excellent short story about the uncertain times after a war, when men trained to kill are left to find their own way.
The difference between right and wrong are decided by good leadership, and with none mistakes are made.
It takes a strong man to right the wrong.

Awesomely well written.

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lady Lavender

The complex emotional journey that runs underneath the goal of the wolves, is intriguing. Dahlia Rose is a dynamic character!

Well written.

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A Social Misadventure

What an interesting predicament James had found himself in. I like the period of history you have chosen. Restoring honor to one;s name was often a predicament faced by many young men of society at the time, I wonder how James will pull it off?

Excellent style, and good choice of wording to put the correct historical era into play.

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Creed of the Bounty Hunters

I like the action, and the excellent fight descriptions. I look forward to where this book will take us. Only a couple of chapters in now, but it will be worth watching and reading as it is developed.

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Rebecca

I enjoyed the first chapters very much Rebecca is an interesting prisoner in her own house. I am looking forward to the rest of this read.
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Rings

A good read. There are lessons about gifts and responsibility. Once you think about what you read, it hits you on a deeper level. Well done!

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Theodore

Good basic concept. I'm caught in the conflict already. Highschool undercurrents are well done. Just needs a tiny bit of editing to make it truly awesome.

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