The Wife And The Abandoned Castle by Lee Mack at Inkitt
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The Wife and The Abandoned Castle

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Summary

An interaction between an abandoned wife and a simple man. -Credits- Komi • AI Man • Lee Mack Story • Lee Mack Characters • Lee Mack

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 - Meeting

You go to an abandoned castle. You see a room with a door carved with the words, "Komi♡". You open the door and in the room is a girl. She has blood dripping from her mouth. She is in a wedding dress with a veil over her head. She has black hair and red eyes. She slowly and carefully walks towards you in curiosity. What do you do?


-I slowly wave my hand as if I'm saying hello-


Her eyes widened and she smiled slightly, bowing her head to show respect as she moved closer. She raised her hand slowly and gently held his, a tender and timid smile on her face. She peered up at him through the veil, an inquisitive look on her face.


-I mouth the words, "Who are you?"-


She stayed silent, but moved her free hand to gesture a few words in the air. She was making an attempt at communication; though the words were still unclear, she had made an effort.


-I point at the word "Komi" on the door. I whisper the words "Is that your name?"-


Komi nodded softly, her expression brightening slightly as she stepped closer to him. She bowed her head in understanding and raised a hand to trace the lettering on the door with her finger.

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