What is your opinion?
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My opinion
"I like the male character. He seems like he would be a great warrior. I would recommend this to my friends because they like books on cultivation."
The Defiant
"I liked the story a lot! I liked the character Mo, and Tian is a little snot but he has to be in this world. A kinda Isekai-like plot so far, it's good! However, the writing style needs a bit of sprucing up. There were a lot of times I confused the dialogue with the actions. I think a simple set of quotation marks around the dialogue serves as a solution to this problem. Also commas! I suck at them, but even I noticed their lack lol. They are tricky buggers, however, so I don't fault the author for skipping them lol. Otherwise, a few spelling errors and such. I think you did well in the dialogue and you did good introspection too. The action was far better than my own lol. Keep up the good work! I hope to read more!"
A real ride!
"Okay, so I think there’s a lot to like here. Your scope is grandiose, ethereal even in how you’re seemingly reincarnating this character, samsara-like throughout history. Not to mention some of these visuals are really great! Where I run into trouble is the pacing and format. The format has changed from second-person to omniscient to what I can only describe as comic strip format in the span of three chapters. I think you should really hit the brakes, choose a point of view, and reconsider what you want this story to be, because some of this imagery is truly stellar. "
