Chillingly Fun

"That was one amazing piece of writing! The plot of the story was reasonably good, moving forth at an acceptable pace. There was sufficient attention given to the wife's character to make her stand out rather than just being a nondescript part of the background. It was fascinating to discover the main character's mind. The detail with which taste and sound were merged was mind-boggling. I almost felt as if I could taste sounds too. There was use of superb technique to explain the varying sensations felt by the main character. The whole concept was chilling but surprisingly fun to read about, because it was executed so well. The part about blood being tasteless and the only thing he could thus eat was very good. It made me wonder why anger could taste like blood, but blood did not sound like anger. I really hope you could elaborate on that a little bit. A few grammatical errors which I spotted: (1) "ohmyyou'resomesweetforsayingthat" - The "me" should be deleted and dashes put between the individual words. (2) There should be a comma not a semicolon after "symptoms, they wanted" It was a wonderful read and I look forward to the next chapters eagerly. The last sentence was a great way to sum up the merging of taste and sound and the death of the man, it left me clamouring for more."