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The Real Love Story

"A roller coaster ride all the way through****Thoughtfulness of all the characters****The doubts, criticisms and influences were evident from the start****This is the life, making attempts to do the right thing until one realizes how manipulation was heavy on your trail all along****When the Light begins to dawn, then begins freedom****You, me, all free when we step out of the box to see the expansive vista--I knew these two felt the beginning of something different when they met***He was open to it; she took a longer, tedious path until she was willing to take those first steps up to self-realization and the endless possibilities of a real love. Thanks to Marcia Aquova, your story was great fun to read****Let us think it is also a great lesson to learn."

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"Great story "

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Burning passion

"This is a great stories. Interesting that Fiore cheated on her fiance'. She doesn't feel guilty about it and Henry doesn't think anything about another man being in her apartment. I can't wait to read the rest of it to see if she keeps keeps FVCKING Edward. If she falls in love with Edward while married to Henry. "

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Burning passion

"Woooow this story is incredible...amazing writing style, makes you think a lot... really enjoyed reading it and epiloque is everything that i have wished for them ....MUST READ...ty wonderful Author 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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Miss

"Oh if not for the rushed ending, I would have given this story full marks but unfortunately I’m a true romantic at heart and would have loved the romance at the end to be drawn out and maybe even get another wedding but was just left hanging!"

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