Back to Story

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Good work

"I love this story soo much I hope u continue I want to know what was said in the room the suspense is killing me"

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Victory Formation

"Love the story"

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Dude

"Dude just go for it kendrick already knows, the worst she can say is no. You won't die if you tell her"

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Yes

"Good read never got bored good writing style would read again over and over"

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Victory formation

"Loved it!! Awesome read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Victory Formation

"This is a really well written book. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Beautiful story line. The right amount of drama. Loved it ❤️😍❤️"

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Victory Formation

"I loved this story, the plot, the characters and the author’s writing style. It is an amazing and exciting story. I love a great love story. I wish there were more chapters seeing how their relationship grows and more about their child and future together. Please author give us more about them. "

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Loved it!

"I always enjoy a good forbidden story. Loved the plot and all the details. Great job. Keep up the amazing work."

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Love it!

"I can't stop ready love each book!"

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Book

"Excellent work!!!"

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Great Story!

"I loved the plot and the story was engaging! Loved it."

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Sweet and spicy

"I enjoyed this story and the duel POV! I love the brothers best friend/forbidden romance genre and liked that we didn’t have too much angst before the two lovebirds got it on 😉 the ending was really sweet and a lovely way to tie things up. ❤️"

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Victory Formation

"Good plot! Feels rushed, but still enjoyed it. Some grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! 💕💕💕"

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Victory formation

"Absolutely amazing love story with lots of great humor......loved it soooo much....ty Author 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖"

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Amazing

"It's cute and ok "

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Victory Formation

"A fast paced romantic short story that was a delight to read. "

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Loved it

"I loved all the characters. Such a cute story. Definitely recommend."

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Victory Formation

"This was an absolute blast! Loved it, loved it, loved it. Really, author, you write some damn good books and this is another one. You did not disappoint and I am waiting with bated breath for more of your works. Great job!"

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Nice

"Fun and entertaining writing by the author keep it up"

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So far

"Really like this chapter can’t wait to read more so far so good "

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