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Tales Told Out of School 2. A Mind of Her Own

"After an intense start, this story continues with a much more romantic situation which is long overdue. Another terrific read by this author! "

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Tales...2 A Mind of Her Own

"Once again, another wonderful story! I liked Deke immediately. loved his sense of humour. The scenes in the bar, although well written, really disturbed me as I could not believe that anything like that could actually happen. Susan definitely needed rescuing! But I could relate to her in a way, having gone to an 'all girls' high school myself until we emigrated. She may have appeared 'innocent' but she still had a mind of her own and knew exactly what she wanted. I was impressed with Miss Chlders, and found her outspoken attitude quite refreshing . Perfect ending!"

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TTOOS 2: A Mind Of Her Own

"I truly enjoyed reading this love story & the way it unfolded. I’m a huge fan of happy endings."

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A LOT!!!!!!!!

"ΤΟ ΛΑΤΡΕΥΩ!!! ΕΧΕΙ ΠΟΛΥ ΩΡΑΙΑ ΠΛΟΚΗ!!! ΝΑΙ ΘΑ ΤΟ ΠΡΟΤΕΙΝΑ ΚΑΙ ΣΕ ΑΛΛΟΥΣ."

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I am speechless..!!

"I swear you literally got me on the edge of my seat with this one. The build up killed me!!! I could not stop reading, I really enjoyed how you incorporated the main characters previous encounters that lead to their happy ending. Gosh I could not stop swooning and Deke's sense of humor was just hilarious!! I love it!! "

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Tale 2

"There needs to be only one word to describe this story. PRICELESS. And I mean that sincerely. "

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I can't believe it's over... 💔🙊

"This story by far is the best of the series (Although I'm yet to read number 10). I'm so in love. You created a man that I'd say is every woman's dream of a "perfect man". Deke is nothing short of perfection and his actions and thoughts express that wonderfully. He is just so good. Susan and Deke's story is unfathomly amazing - the plot from the start indicates enigma and passion but also love endlessly deep love. Every small situation they face together undoubtedly brings them closer and closer and it's such a beautiful thing to follow as you read on. Their relationship, the bond they have is stronger than I thought possible to create in words. I'm uplifted. In the beginning Deke's thoughts about Susan are terribly repetitive - I'm unsure if this is to emphasise his endless love for her but I felt it was slightly overbearing at such an early point in the story. 😍😿Beautifully stunning.😻😖"

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Very good

"The story arch eas good and the relationship was built well instead of just indulging in eac other."

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Love it!!!!!

"AMAZING!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 next book to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "

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So Sweet

"At first I fell in love with Deke, then I fell in love with Deke and Susan's love and relationship. Good things do come to those that wait. I loved that Deke took his time and how the story was prolonged. I also absolutely LOVED the more colorful language that was used. "

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Fun story

"Loved every bit of it. Great story with good erotica mixed in. "

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Weirdly interesting

"Its weird but still interesting enough that I want to keep reading. I like it though."

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"A few missing words and incorrect spelling but it doesn't bother me! I love this story!"

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Absolutely Genius!

"You never fail to deliver quite a tale - I admire your creativity"

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A mind of their own

"A Mind of Her Own is a very effective, not to mention highly erotic, exploration of a first-time relationship, especially from within the heads of both participants. I found starting at the high point and then flashing back to the couple’s first interactions to be very enjoyable. Then there is a long plateau of coming closer with the eroticism kept just be low the boiling point. Interspersed there pleasing little details like the fact that the hero darns his socks or that the heat hit them like a hammer. The story is a wonderfully detailed exploit of initiating a virgin into coital intimacy balancing love, lust and the constraints of conventionality."

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Bold but beautiful

"This is coming from someone who avoids mature contents even in parts. It's good on plot and smart on words. "

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Lovely and remarkable story!

"Love the detailed describtion of their feelings and thoughts .It felt like i was living with them it was just sensual and breath taking.this is not a negative critic but just an idea,sorry if i sound judgmental but i would have love a more detailed describtion when they were making love i couldnt fully image how they were making love.overall i loved the story and the characters .keep up your good work.thank you."

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Little big man

"Interesting reading"

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Warm and romantic

"A very entertaining, interesting plot, a bit drawn out at times. I find gentle, romantic love better than modern quickies. The underlying story line is realistic and thrilling enough to keep the reader interested. Thank you for this story. "

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Its excruciatingly slow placed

"This is a very different writing style that I've come across on this entire app. However, if the author could stop repeating the same scenarios, it would move in a more lucid manner. "

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