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It keeps the horror growing up!!!

"Hi Brent, I´ve just read your story and let me tell you, it´s one of the best horror stories I´ve read so far. It kept me wanting to go further into the Hell Hole, to really see if I could go all the way through. You got what it takes to write this kind of stories, keep at them, really. The plot is very original and your writing is very good in the punctuation and grammar. Congratulations!!!"

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Never going to a haunted house again.

"The author has literally made me unwilling to walk alone to the parking lot, the grocery store, and I will never, ever, go to a haunted house again. Ever. Even if my friends beg, I'm not going. Ever."

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Hell Hole Indeed

"This has a nice set up and delivery. Like a classic slasher flick. You get to know these characters maybe even care about them and then BAM the hammer falls. I would love to see this as a movie. You should write it up as a screenplay and take it to Hollywood."

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