Tobi Doyle MacBrayne

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So sad... an amazing journey into crazy

I was so impressed with this piece. The slow degradation of the main character into a dark and crazy place is beautifully written. I liked that the characters physical descriptions were not described because it gave me a sense that it could be someone I know or love. The grief that breaks the main character is well-portrayed and made for a poignant and horrific - and entirely believable story!

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Never going to a haunted house again.

The author has literally made me unwilling to walk alone to the parking lot, the grocery store, and I will never, ever, go to a haunted house again. Ever. Even if my friends beg, I'm not going. Ever.

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Truly Twisted

I've never wished for the heroine of the story to die before, but I really hoped that Adelia would have an easy death. So scary and twisted, I was really hoping she would survive, and then I really hoped she wouldn't. I loved it..

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