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Something sweet

"I really loved the story it was pretty cute and alike funny.no doubt the writing was amazing keep the good work.❤️"

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Intriguing

"Dialogues are very forward (confident in being flirty) in a good manner, which reveals quite intriguing personalities between Amyra and Yashwa. It is a romance story after all. The writing is concise and easy to make imagery of. However, I noticed some inconsistencies with the POV writing despite that there's a show of POV shift in chapter 2. I notice some paragraphs suddenly having "I" and "Ours" when the previous paragraphs were consistent with she/her and he/him/his in them unless those parts are supposedly written in the 3rd POV Omnicient. If this is the case, I recommend putting some markers in the chapters (just like that one in Chapter 2) or Italicizing those parts to have an indication for readers. Overall, it is a compelling plot, and I love the showcase of little scenarios of what childhood is like and the marriage cultures in India, which is a learning for me. Keep up the good work!"

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Courtship Wonders

"Two Words! Dazzling description! Your concept and narrations are unique and gives justice to every single tales... Keep this pace, You'll be shining in no time☀️ Love yourself! When I'm reading, You certainly made me feel loved through your words. "

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Clusters Of Adoration

"Midnight Lovers is full of shyness and adorable moments 🤭 Dear Writer, you've certainly outdone yourself like always🤗🤗"

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Enchantments Of Midnight

"Beautiful narration! I could feel the childhood days as the cravings I felt back then! Midnight Lovers have my heart forever 💞"

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Great read so far

"The story is interesting, I also love the writing style of the author. 5 stars."

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MIDNIGHT LOVERS

"Praise I received, Dated: 13th Of November 2023 "Many writers are successful at expressing what's in their hearts or articulating a particular point of view. Somvanshiya's books do both and more" I'm so happy and feel appreciated for such wonderful feedback. Notes to the future Readers 😍 Sincerely, Soma 😍"

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