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Interesting

"Thank you for sharing the story with us readers. I love your story, but it could be confusing in parts it seems as if you ran out of time and just tried to end it. Are you going to make a sequel so you can finish up about his journey and the mushroom picker how are they related? Update I like the last chapter you added. It helped a little but now waiting for the sequel we were set up for. Thank you for updating."

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Very unique!

"Really interesting story so far, can't wait to read the next part! "

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