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Una colección de cuentos, relatos y poesía sobre momentos en la vida. El dolor o el amor transformado en palabras.
Tú, flor maldita
que del viento exhala
aromas de ausencias
y a la ventana toca
el olvido del adiós.
De primavera a tu mano,
a verano almas fundidas.
Pétalos marchitos,
hojas en polvo de otoño.
En invierno con dagas
ardientes te despediste.
Miradas de fluorita,
esperanza en sonrisas
devoradas por sombras.
Evanescentes palabras
y melodías extintas.
Amor efímero latente,
quisiera recobrarte,
anhelarte y amarte
con aquel último beso
que murió de esperar.
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Evtida: It was a very sweet story, but it felt rushed. It didn't really convey the emotions. For example, when the girl was kidnapped, instead of panicking, going crazy, and causing a scene, giving in felt strange... His exaggerated relationship with his gay friend was also odd in my opinion.
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LauraLea: Truly enjoyed this book! I worked with deaf ed in high school so this hit close to home. Will be reading more by this author!!
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Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...
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XhellionX: Sehr schöne Kurzgeschichte, hab sie gern gelesen. Ein paar Fehler haben sich noch eingeschlichen.
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Tanja : Eine wirklich wunderschöne Geschichte. Sehr schön geschrieben mit Gefühl. Man konnte sich sehr gut in die Charaktere hinein versetzen. Lia hat mir sehr gut gefallen,wie sie sich verändert hat im lauf der Geschichte,selbstbewusster geworden ist und sich gegen Joachim und seine Familie durch gesetzt h...
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MjeyW💖: Encore une belle histoire, touchante et pleine de magie.Magnifique roman à découvrir.
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TMarc: i love how a lone man fell in love with an orphaned woman . i love the story !
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Fiona Walker: First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed this short story. I did find the single line paragraphs a little uncomfortable to read as it didn’t flow but the content was amusing and sweet. For me, the ending didn’t feel like an ending, it just stopped. I understand the implication of the final c...
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