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Attention

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Summary

Dereck, an older attractive brother, dates girls in the neighborhood who salivate over him. Taylor, his younger brother, receives no attention from Dereck until things go wrong and a girl he brought over one night goes missing. Will Taylor get the attention he desires from Dereck, or will he try to figure out what's going on with the missing girl? Could Dereck be to blame, or is it all in Taylor's head?

Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 Pretty Boy

Rumors

Girl 1: Rumors have it that a pretty boy in the neighborhood dated girls in the community, but they all seem to vanish.

Girl 2: Why is that?

Girl 1: I don’t know. But he is very fond of

Girl 2: hmm? I’ve never seen him before. Could you describe him?

Girl 1: He’s about 6 ft tall, muscular oh wait, speak of the devil, there he is!!

Girl 2: oh wow!!

Dereck coming in from getting the mail, “Hey wassup Taylor! What’s going on, Lil bro?”

“Nothing much. Sam is here. She came over to help mom cook.”

Sam is our next-door neighbor. She comes over now and then, and I think she has a thing for Dereck. All the girls in the neighborhood are obsessed with him. Dereck is always seeing a girl, but they vanish for some reason. He attracts women as well but mainly girls around his age. He’s dated 14 girls in the last two months. I can’t believe I’m going to say this, but my brother is a man whore. Either that or he doesn’t like being alone. I just wish he’d stay home and play and do brotherly things.

Sam: Hey, Dereck!! How are you?

Dereck: I’m good.

Sam: That’s good, well I’ll see you guys later. Bye, Dereck!

Sam: That’s good, well I’ll see you guys later. Bye, Dereck!

“She kissed me on the cheek. I didn’t mind that she was like an older sister.

“Hey, Dereck, do you have anything going on today?”

“No, not really. I have someone coming over to just chill. Why do you ask?”

“I wanted to see if you wanted to play games or something, that’s all.”

“Oh, yeah, sure.”

Introducing a Visitor

We played video games for about two hrs until someone came over. Her name was Linda. She had pretty long hair, brown eyes, and dark ebony skin.

My mom went to bed 15 min after getting to know things about Linda. Dereck and Linda were cuddling under a blanket while watching tv. I could hear moaning downstairs. I’m surprised my mom didn’t hear that, but she works a lot, so she is exhausted.

Ten min later, I heard the front door open and close. Linda must have left.

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