What is your opinion?
Good, promising start
"I personally enjoy reading reincarnation stories, so I am excited to find that this is one. But there is little done to the main character's development, and I believe more work should be put into it. I wish to understand why and how her past life caused the drastic change in her behaviour, and I also want to experience the feelings of regret she has for her past behaviour. Some scenes need to be worked on too. At times the characters jump from one place to another, and it is a little hard trying to catch up. Overall, this is a good read. I look forward to your next update!"
Promising, But Needs Work
"The core idea for this story is good: a princess looses everything and reeincarnates, remembering her past life after an accident. But there are certain things that hold it back. Grammar and Formating: A few typos are normal and they don't distract much, but is better to have as little as possible.There are also some errors involving narrative POV. Reading about these two things and using a program to check grammar can help the author improve easily. Writing style: My main problem with this is that everything moves by too fast and there's little description of the enviroment the characters inhabit or even of the characters' physical appearance. The effect is less inmmersive for the reader. I think the chapters would benefit from being a little longer. There's also some show don't tell moments Characters: I don't have much to say here. The characters are sympathetic and are built up during the chapters well enough. My only issues are one action in the protagonist's past that the author changed when I pointed it out, so its not an issue anymore, and her son, who kind of falls into the trap of "Kid character who is cute, loves everyone and doesn't have much personality aside from 'child'". But again, that can be easily fixed if more its added to his character as the story advances. And with that, I think I said everything I think could help the author improve. I hope this was an useful review and that you keep going in your writing journey."
