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The Expirement

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Summary

"You have to be perfect!" she shouts "I'm trying!" I say tears pouring down my face. "I really am, its just hard." I say "Try harder!" She screams going through flash cards "Yes, mother." I say. Raelynn Carter is a teenager in the time of 2054. The world has changed a lot and now girls and boys are never allowed contact or to even see the other gender. Raelynn is going on a run whenever she meets Liam Blume and her life is changing.. for the better or worse? Only time will tell.

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Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

1 - The beginning

1 - The Beginning

I walk into the interview room. “Hello, Raelynn.” The interviewers greet me as I sit down. There are a male and two females. One of the females, a red-haired woman with green eyes smiles at me “My name is Aria and the female next to me is Miko and the male is Andy.” Aria says and I smile. “Raelynn Carter,” I say holding out my hand for them.

I shake hands with Aria, Miko, and Andy. “So how old are you Raelynn?” Miko asks me “I am 17 turning 18 in 2 weeks.” I say as I mess with my hands feeling a little anxious. I look at my watch 50 minutes to go Rae. I think as I look up and see the interviewers looking at me curiously. “How is your setting at home?” Andy asks me “It is fine, we live in a nice neighborhood that has many children in it.” I tell them “What is your favorite color?” Aria asks me “I like dark maroon because it has a sense of mystery.” I say honestly “Interesting.” Andy says writing down some notes. “What are your hobbies?” Andy asks me “I like to sing and run.” I tell them and they smile. I smile back knowing this interview is only the beginning.

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