Inkitt
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Beautiful and very satisfying

"This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read in my life...this short book contains so many emotions in a few words and this's a beautiful quality of good writing..the ending made me so happy and sad at the same time..the personalities of characters are well defined....I'll surely give it a re-read"

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A good ending

"This is the shortest story I have ever read on this app, and I quite enjoyed the plotline. I was afraid when I saw Ramon and Rebecca enjoying a relationship together, but was happy when he received his deserved end. It was okay, at least he got to see his grandchild. That was enough forgiveness from Rebecca."

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First Impression

"First impression on Chapter one, I was impressed! "

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