Chapter 1
SAVAGE QUEEN
Written by
Christopher Onofrey
FADE IN:
EXT. FOREST – NIGHT
A deer sprints away from something from the woods.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
People often think having powers is
good. I mean, just look at all your
comic book heroes. What? You
thought those were fake. There just
all retired, while the new kids
deal with the aftermath, like the
government.
NARRATOR (V.O.)
(PORTUGUESE)
And it freaking sucks!
EXT. FOREST ENTRANCE WAY – NIGHT
While the deer, worn out, stands still as a girl leaps from
the nearby bush.
NARRATOR/KIRA (V.O.)
My name is Kira Thorn, your Savage
Queen, and my story starts on
Junior Prom night.
Kira, seventeen, acts like a guard dog to her friends and
family, but to others she acts like a dogfighter. She has
shoulder-length blonde hair. She wears ripped jeans, a black
sweatshirt, and sandals. She drags the deer behind her; one
arm drips blood.
A large BLACK WOLF with scars emerges from the shadows and
lingers at the crosswalks. The black wolf scratches the tree
while it glares at Kira. Kira readies to fight the wolf, but
it grins and walks away. Kira drops the dear and sneaks into
her backyard, and climbs into her bedroom window.
INT. DAD’S TRUCK – AFTERNOON
Kira enters her dad’s red Toyota Tacoma as he cleans the
dashboard. Her DAD, forty-two, is a workaholic with a gentle
soul. He has short black hair, and wears jeans, a buttondown, and dress shoes.
2.
KIRA
Now, dad, I know you said no prom,
but I have a reason.
DAD
And that is?
KIRA
Steve. We don’t trust him, Sarah
doesn’t trust him.
KIRA (CONT’D)
(PORTUGUESE)
Heck! Even the town can’t trust
him.
KIRA (CONT’D)
I should go and make sure he
doesn’t try anything with Sarah.
DAD
Maybe?
KIRA
But, dad, if your only concern is
the black wolf I saw last night, I
can take it.
DAD
It’s not the fact that the animal
is nearby. It’s what you said about
its more human demeanor.
KIRA
Do you think someone is after me!
For real this time?
DAD
Yes. But, I can’t exactly talk you
out of protecting Sarah now can I?
As they arrive home, Kira hugs her dad and rushes to her
room. A picture of a dark-green dress and ponytail with
braids hangs on the mirror.
She breaths in and closes her eyes, as her clothes and hair
transform to match the picture. On her way out, she grabs her
guitar and joins SARAH, sixteen, wears a black dress and
shows Kira an app she built from scratch. Sarah like a cat
tends to keep to herself and hide details.
3.
STEVE, seventeen, the town troublemaker sits in the front of
his yellow sports car as he twirls his knife.
INT. SCHOOL AUDITORIUM – NIGHT
Kira is on stage as she finishes a rock song with her band.
As the slow love song plays Kira heads off to the side of the
room. Sarah joins her, and the two laugh as Steve gets caught
in his attempt to spike the punch.
Kira laughs as she strolls toward the exit. Kira bumps into a
MAN IN A SUIT, forty-five, with sunglasses. He drops two
coins. Kira catches them and hands them back.
MAN IN A SUIT
Sorry about that, Miss Thorn, but
keep one. I think you’ll need it.
Kira nods and rushes outside the door.
INT. THORN FAMILY HOUSE KITCHEN – NIGHT
Kira arrives home in her prom dress, and locks the door
behind her. She grabs a drink and looks up; she sees The
Black Wolf in the distance. Kira glares as it darts to the
kitchen door then the wolf knocks.
KIRA
I don’t know what you are or want,
but if you try anything, I can--
BLACK WOLF
My dear, such harsh words. We are
more alike than you think. However,
my apologies for the scare.
KIRA
And you are?
BLACK WOLF/DARIUS
The name is
Darius.
Kira unlocks and inches the door open. The wolf transforms
into DARIUS, forty-two, a man who wears his wanted poster on
his face. Sports a tattered shirt, a leather jacket, jeans,
and boots. Kira checks the clock on the kitchen wall.
KIRA
You have five minutes till officers
arrive. Talk.
4.
DARIUS
What would you like to know?
KIRA
You’re a shapeshifter like me. How?
DARIUS
Government experiments. You know
they like to have control the upper
hand.
KIRA
Then how are you here?
DARIUS
I broke free and want to help you
do the same.
KIRA
I don’t need to be broken free.
DARIUS
Don’t you? Look at yourself using
your powers to play pretend at
prom. You hide in a farmhouse; Need
I say more?
KIRA
How?--
DARIUS
Do I know all that? I’ve been
watching you for years. Join me,
and you won’t have to hide.
KIRA
I appreciate the offer, but you
should go.
Darius
Kira, this is not an offer. This is
a choice if you don’t come with me--
KIRA
What you’ll try to kill me? I’m not
scared of you.
Darius transforms back into his wolf from, and sneers as he
saunters off.
5.
INT. THORN FAMILY HOUSE LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Kira sprints to the couch to look for the house phone.
Frantic, she dials her dad’s number. Kira fears the worst as
it goes straight to static, she collapses in the chair as she
huffs. Her cell phone plays Sarah’s ringtone.
SARAH
Steve.
KIRA
What about him?
SARAH
He’s gone missing.
KIRA
I’ll try and get in touch with my
dad, but I--
SARAH
What’s wrong? Did you hurt someone
again? Government? I can’t loose--
KIRA
Don’t worry about it just stay
where you are I’ll have my dad get
you.
Kira’s appearance shifts as she hangs up. Kira’s hair and
nails become long. She hesitates for a moment, then barrels
out the door.
EXT. FOREST - NIGHT -(THREE HOURS LATER)
Kira lies in a pool of red then rises. She sniffs the air, as
a tear runs down her face. Her nose leads her to Steve’s body
with a major claw mark in his chest. Kira peers to a large
rock by the road with blood letters that reads, “You should
have joined.”
Kira holds her breath; as sirens blare. She touches Steve
then closes her eyes. She looks down at her hands and arms,
and sees her new look. She peers into a puddle of water and
smiles at her success.
6.
EXT. THORN FAMILY HOUSE - NIGHT
Kira’s dad answers a knock at the door to see A Man In A
Suit/LOGAN. LOGAN looks cold with an aura of regrets that
hunt him. Logan sits on the top step as Kira’s dad sits
beside him.
DAD
Agent Grace.
LOGAN
Logan is fine, but know I am sorry
for this.
Logan hands Kira’s dad a document.
Kira’s dad taps Logan on the shoulder as he then enters a car
and drives away. Logan sighs as he heads into his black chevy
with Sarah.
LOGAN (CONT’D)
Did you find the location of the
other coin?
SARAH
Yea, she is in the forest two miles
north.
EXT. FOREST - NIGHT
Kira rushes through the forest and stumbles upon a camp.
Agents with a black wolf logo are all around. Kira transforms
into a squirrel and climbs high into the tree. She sits on a
branch and the coin rings.
SARAH
Hey Kira.
KIRA
Sarah how? Why?--
SARAH
To put it simply cool spy coin I
made; you got it from prom.
KIRA
The man?
SARAH
Yea his name is Logan and I am with
him now.
7.
KIRA
No, you stay out of this. It’s--
SARAH.
I know, but I am taking this creep
down with you.
KIRA
Why?
SARAH
Got home and found my parents and
dog dead. I’m putting a bullet in
him.
KIRA
I just don’t think--
LOGAN
Kira I need you to get to Seventh
and Park, your dad put you in my
care as his last wish.
KIRA
He killed--
LOGAN
I’m afraid so, but you don’t have
time to focus on revenge--
Agents find Kira and fire. She hops from the trees into town.
EXT. TOWN SQUARE - NIGHT.
Kira takes a deep breath and runs toward 1st Street.
BEGIN MONTAGE - FIGHT TO SEVENTH AND PARK:
-- EXT. FIRST STREET - Night
Kira transforms into a Margay and tries her best to hide
under cars and in peoples yard. A dog revels her location to
the Agents.
-- EXT. SECOND STREET - Night
As she is being shot at Kira transforms into a spiny tree-rat
and heads into the sewer.
8.
-- EXT. THIRD STREET - Night
As Kira emerges from the sewer she transforms into a Maned
Wolf and tries to hide until a family’s screams alert the
agents.
-- EXT. FOURTH STREET - Night
Kira heads into the tunnel and fights the Agents that
surround her.
-- INT. FIFTH STREET MUSIC STORE - NIGHT
Kira transforms to look like the teen boy in the store. She
smiles at the playlist as one of her songs is in the queue.
Agents spot her and she fights them.
-- INT. SIXTH STREET MALL - Night
Kira with heavy breath sighs as agents surround her only
escape. She fights her way out but is shot by a rifle. She
limps and reaches the location.
END MONTAGE
EXT. NATURE PARK - NIGHT
Kira holds her ground as a black Chevy barrels toward her.
She grabs the car and stops it. She freezes as she peers into
the front window to see Sarah and Logan. She enters the car
as Logan and Sarah nurse her wound.
LOGAN
Nice to meet under less mystery
KIRA
Yea, I guess.
LOGAN
Questions?
KIRA
I heard him say brother is that
true? And why did you bring Sarah?
LOGAN
Unfortunately yes. Darius is my
problem. Sarah well how should I
say --
9.
SARAH
I got high test score on a secret
report online that I hacked into. I
was going to tell you when we--
Darius lifts up the car and flings it into the nearby forest.
EXT. FOREST - NIGHT
Logan and Sarah crawl out from the car and fire their pistols
at Darius. Kira leaps out from the roof and begins to
skirmish Darius. Darius laughs as he throws Kira through a
long sharp rock.
Kira watches Logan get his wrist broken and then Darius turns
to Sarah. Darius claws her, then drags her to the cliff’s
side. Kira screams and shapeshifts. She lunges for Darius and
they both descend towards the ravine.
EXT. CLIFF SIDE - NIGHT
Kira and Darius brawl through the air. Darius grabs Kira as
he notices the ground but Kira overpowers Darius as he lands
back first on the rocky terrain.
EXT. RAVINE - NIGHT
Darius laughs as he picks up Kira by the neck. He slams her
into a spiky rock, as blood pours and her screams fill engulf
the air.
DARIUS
You think you can change? You think
they will accept you? Now sweetie
that has to be the dumbest dream
I’ve heard.
KIRA
Don’t Call me Sweetie You sick
animal.
DARIUS
Aww! Still have some bark left.
Good!
Logan with a shot distracts Darius for a moment. Kira pulls
herself from the rock just as Darius is about to kill Logan.
She lunges to Darius’s head and slams him down. Darius gets
up and fights Kira to the point of exhaustion. Kira stands
triumphant over Darius.
9.
10.
KIRA
What do we do? We can’t just leave
him here.
LOGAN
Your call.
KIRA
Got a way to lock him up?
SARAH
No! He should die. He--
KIRA
Are we monster’s like him now?
SARAH
Justice, Kira if you won’t kill him
I will.
KIRA
Justice is cuffing him and putting
him in jail. A bullet to the head
isn’t right.
A group of agents with large brown mental cuffs appear.
SARAH
I--
Kira hugs Sarah.
KIRA
Need time to heal. So do I. It
seems Logan does as well. Let’s
heal together.
SARAH
How? I don’t have a home.
LOGAN
About that.
INT LOGAN’S ESTATE - NIGHT (ONE YEAR LATER)
Kira climbs into her room. Sarah looks to the window and
smiles as she closes her laptop lid and tip-toes to the
bathroom. Kira plucks at her guitar and stares at the door
with a framed white piece of paper as the light from the
bathroom slides past it reads adoption of Kira Thorn, and
Sarah Grace.
FADE TO BLACK.








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