What is your opinion?
I loved it so much😭😭
"It was so cute and sweet but simultaneously followed the story progress so well!!! You've got to write more stories, short or prolonged! The potential is great :D I can't wait to read more about the characters 💗💗 As for literal writing review, you do great with structuring the chapters that come altogether so I think you'll be just perfect if you consider writing longer books in the futures - most writers struggle with connectivity between chapters which eventually makes the story longer than needed, even I have trouble with it! But you manage it just fine💗 Overall, you HAVE TO write more!! Great Job Lemon!"
every soul will taste death
"i like it! and i like how the girl Qiturah dont show any stupid feelings! i like that she didn't love at first sight! i did get tired of girls falling in love at first sight in novels!! so i like it 😁"
Energetic and fun but short
"I'm definitely disappointed but in a good way. This story is way too short. It could be expanded from a short story into a novel. These characters are great, the writing is great, and the foundation for a big story has begun. Please consider expanding it. It's a good short story. It could be a great novel. "
