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Looking good!!

"So far has great human wolf balance with just the tight amount of seriousness and humor. looking forward to next chapter!!!"

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The ranch

"The story has been easy to follow the characters are interesting. Can not wait to read the rest."

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The Ranch

"I am excited to see what happens next and will let my sister know to read this book "

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I like the book but what happen is it on going or what

"Where is the rest of the book"

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The ranch

"I’ve been hooked since the first page. I love the humor between the characters. Now the drama is starting and has me checking every 5 mins for an updated chapter. Story has me hooked waiting to see what unfolds next. "

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Its Good

"Its Good but how often will the updated come through as I don't want to keep reading it over and over until more chapters come out."

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The Ranch

"Partway through and enjoying it a lot "

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The Ranch

"I love the story line, I also love the suspense it had at times , the characters are so good they seem real , I really don’t want the story to end "

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The Ranch

"Your work is amazing and I am loving it since the start. I love the diversity of emotions. Keep up the great work❤️. "

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The Ranch

"Love it when a book makes you feel every emotion. You cry, laugh, get angry, feel fear for your characters. Exceptional writing. Please hurry with next part. Can't wait."

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Ranch

"Can't wait for more updates "

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So glad I found this!

"I rarely ever find a book so regulated with both plot unveiling, character recognition and so well structured!! This will be on my refreshment reading list☺️ Love the characters already! Please keep writing ma'am!❤️ I'll give this to you too, I whole heartedly appreciate the inclusivity of the overlooked Global issues, thank you❤️❤️"

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The Ranch

"Absolutely love the story. Can't wait to read more."

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Different yet very good

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Where is the rest of this book?!

"The story captivated me. Thank you so much for writing it! And, please don't feel pressure to hurry this story along. Take your time writing it. I know from experience it takes a lot. I'm just so happy to find a book not about a young woman, being dominated by a man, or changing from 'evil to good'. You stay true to your heart and write from there, not what the masses want these days. The pacing is good, some chapters are a bit short and there are some paragraphs filled with sentences which tell instead of show. These are all things everyone can learn; the creativity, plot and what the story is actually about isn't. Someone either has that, or they don't; and you have it! I'm going to leave some feedback from the select text feature (you'll receive mails with it), and you can do with it what you want. Use it or throw it away; either way is fine and it won't keep me from reading the following chapters. Keep up the good work!"

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A vivid and immersive

"The author's use of show don't tell technique is excellent. I'm not only enjoying the story, but I'm also learning from it. You did well to avoid the white room syndrome by adding details about the setting and the characters' actions."

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So far, So good

"The reason the plot was only given a four out of five is because I have not been able to read much. Since that is the case I would much rather give a revised update after completing the book. As a fellow Texan this is pretty spot on for that area. If there are mistakes they were so small my brain automatically converted it over so I have no complaints. It's written in a very readable style and well crafted. I look forward to finishing the story. "

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Compelling Story!

"There's never a dull moment in this story, so I don't find myself ever skipping over paragraphs out of boredom! Every chapter is enjoyable and the main character's and side characters are all very distinct. Can't wait to finish it! "

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the ranch

"Love concept of this book"

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Beautifully written

"Great job on this book! It’s intriguing and beautifully written. And yeah I also like that you include a main character in the 40’s. Best of luck! ❤️"

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