When a rose turns black
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When a rose turns black

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Story Notes

I know this story may seem long but please bear with me! Muwah 💋🌹❤️

Summary

this story talks about alot of characters but there is one thing in common between them and that is “revenge” Mainly; It is about Aliyaa Aepel, a girl who lost her father due to a mage greediness. going on a long journey to revenge, she learned alot of things. Magic and lessons of life.

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
21
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

"The beginning

When Hadi Aepel was wandering in the night, in a desert-like jungle.. he heard a cry near one of the trees, he was shocked, The cries seemed inside the trees.. unbelievable, right? So he used his sword to cut the tree in half, precisely avoiding killing the child, and he found a beautiful baby girl, Her hair was black, and her eyes were of shining honey, She was irresistibly beautiful, Hadi and his wife Farrah (which means joy in Arabic) Did not have children, Due to unknown reasons, He was glad he found a child, He thanked the god of the universe the remained-one, In a very high voice, his prayers to have a child were answered,

“Hmm, what i am going to name you?..” Hadi voiced aloud, that he thought of his father Alii Aepel (which means high in position) and that’s why he called her Aliyaa (a high in position but for women/girls).

“Aliyaa Aepel, welcome to the family..” he whispered, as he gently covered her with his coat, Because the weather was getting cold.. and colder, He headed to his house, welcomed by his wife and his family.

“I found this beautiful, baby girl and I named her Aliyaa, In your honor Father,” Hadi Aepel suggested happily, His father nodded accepting the baby girl.

“Thank you, son, She is really beautiful..” he said as he motioned to Hadi to let him carry her, Hadi his son nodded.

“Here.” Hadi Aepel carried her carefully and then passed the baby to His father, He held her dearly as she pressed a kiss on her forehead.

“Son, having children is a responsibility, but that does not mean I won’t let you have or accept her or anything I am advising you to be a father to her as I was a father to you, Take care of her, indulge her a bit, and don’t be angry on her she is a girl after all! and I wish you luck in that..” His father advised.

“Okay Father, I will do anything to teach her the good values and so many things that’ll be useful to her and I vow I won’t be careless to her!” Hadi Aepel promised that to his father, his father nodded and then murmured to him

“May the remaining one give you the power to do so..” His father prayed.

“Amen,” Hadi Aepel and his wife muttered hopefully.





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Chapter Notes

I know this story may seem long but please bear with me! Muwah 💋🌹❤️
Deleted User
Deleted User

Great writing!

3 years
Janaína
Janaína

oi

3 years
larajames01
larajames01

i just finished your story and i seriously loved it the characters felt so real and every scene kept me invested i actually have a few ideas that might make it even better if you’re up for it

a year

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