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Adventurous!!

"I've been following this story from the start and would love to say it's a quite great work from the author. I love Laila and Crystel....for sure and love to follow their adventurous journey... some many twists and turns kept me hooked with the book from the beginning... Keep it up"

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Love it

"My expectations started out low but this book has been amazing so far! I like Lila's character development throughout. I'm also loving trying to figure out what's up with this Crystal, friend or foe???"

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Crystal is my Favorite!

"I enjoyed the book so far, and love Crystal. Its snark, sarcasm, wit, and even its bloodthirsty side were awesome to get to know. Lila, while naive is pretty impressive as a character as well. She has a great repertoire with Crystal. This was an enjoyable read, and I'll recommend it to any fantasy adventure fan!"

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Such a good book!

"This is actually so good lol. I read it because the author had asked me to make a review, but I really enjoyed this book, which is completely unexpected. The world building and characters are so cleverly made so good job 👏. Even though the book is really good, it’s a little bit vague. I would love that in the next chapters u could explain a little more abt Lila’s village or crystal. But I’m pretty sure u got that covered. ♡"

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Loved it!

"The story seems orginal and interesting. Quite fast paced. The really love the author's writing style, the descriptions are well done but I think it moves too fast in some areas. Will definitely recommend to fantasy and adventure readers!"

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Crystal

"I loved the plot, it was captivating and I loved the characters as well Lila's journey is interesting and I am looking forward to more chapters The story is simply lovely🩷🩷"

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❤️❤️❤️

"I’ve learned a few things thanks to you. Your writing style is amazing."

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Plot twist

"I was expecting a much more generic story after reading the first chapter, but the plot twist in the second chapter takes the plot in a much more interesting direction."

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