What is your opinion?
Karma Required
"I've only read the four chapters presented here. Would love to read the rest of the story. It has a lot of promise... alpha Nate is selfish and needs a BIG comeuppance.... he needs to look at his reflection in a mirror and watch it crack as he is forced to face who he is and what he's become.... and I made the alpha Nate with a small 'a' since he's not nearly the bigshot alpha he thinks he is 😇 As for Ashley, her arrogance and jealousy will be her downfall, hopefully. Since I only got to read four chapters, it's hard to review. As said above, I like the direction I 'think' the story is headed. However, there is no need for profanity... there's a difference in foul language and profanity.... I always take away 'stars' from reviews I do on Amazon, Goodreads, Bookbub, etc when profanity is thrown into the storyline. It always detracts from the plot and storyline."
I really liked it. It moved right along, no dragging. No nonsense filler.
"I liked the whole thing."
Comments
"The whole book was short, but, still I couldn't put it down. "
Book
"Excellent book!!!!!!!"
The Unexpected Mate
"Even though it is a short story it is great. Plenty of dialogue, and conflict Awesome heroine & strong alpha mate. Ending ties the whole story together well. "
The Unexpected Mate
"Nice story, love it "
💜💜
"Great short story 💜 enjoyed reading 💜"
Interesting protagonists
"That was the fist story I read. I chose it because it was short. How refreshing that the female doesn't play hard to get as it usually happens! Although I liked that the plot was to the point, without fillers and unnecessary drama, it seemed to finish abruptly. Nicely written! Liked the dialogues!"
the unexpected mate
"Amazing little story. a lot of love and discovery packed into it. I feel it would have filled out into something more with the inclusion of more details into his past and the birth of the twins. but still great. my biggest issue is with your wording. there were words missing and out of sequence in sentences. some where pretty bad, i had to reread sentences to make sense of what you were trying to say. I personally think you should read the story and correct the mistakes. you would greatly benefit yourself if you carefully read through before publishing. but still a great story. thank you for sharing."
Unexpected Mate
"Great story!"
Beautiful story
"I like the way story has written few details should be more intricate like nathan and layla"
Solid read
"Very enjoyable. Short but action packed. Good plot. Not the same old werewolf rejected mate plot which is nice. "
Ms N
"Enjoying the story line, the art of storytelling and anticipation of what is next "
The Unexpected Mate
"This was a fantastic story! A little bit of spelling issues and problems with wording but all in al a fantastic story! A great writer!!"
Love it
"Love the book so much"
Simple short Beautiful story♥️
"I really liked the spark between 2 head strong dominant personalities and how they talked to find middle ground instead of trying to change each other. A beautiful story💯💕"
Very good read!
"So far an excellent story. Really enjoy reading it. "
The unexpected mate
"Well written and enough action to keep your interests "
♥️♥️♥️
"Love it 🥰 "
The Unexpected Mate
"Loved it! I like that as an Omega she is portrayed as strong and not insipid. I think I would have liked to see him melt when he held his babies 💝💝"
