Ayisha

"I found this story of the effects of the terrorist actions of Boko Haram on the people of Nigeria quite enthralling. The author did a very fine job of showing the humanity of the characters involved, and of helping me as a reader understand the personal impact of a terrorist group I had previously only read about in the news. He was able to do this in spite of the fact that he often struggled with grammar and punctuation, and frequently unnecessarily repeated words. The story would be greatly improved by a good editor."