A short, wild, visceral ride

"This was a fun story that paints a picture of a foreboding fantasy world, interesting cultures, and horrific entities. Greed leads to escalating consequences that could have been avoided, had those responsible he did the warnings of an elder indigenous to the area. By the end it's a crescendo of mayhem and violence threatening to destroy everyone involved. Minor grammar issues but nothing overtly distracting. I believe this young author is still finding their literary voice, and they are developing a very imaginative, kinetic style. "