What is your opinion?
Review
"This is awesome. The tension is delicious! For such a short piece, it certainly does feel like the characters are true to themselves, round too. They feel real. I love this. "
love the story
"i want to amend my previous comments about the book cover. Initially, I had some reservations about the design, but I've since realized that the portrayal of orcs on the cover is actually quite accurate and fitting for the story. It's clear that a lot of thought went into representing these characters authentically, and I appreciate that now. The story itself remains fantastic, and I admire your skill as a writer. My initial reaction to the cover was a bit hasty, and I apologize for that. The more I think about it, the more I see how the cover complements the rich and engaging narrative you've created."
Orc and gyda
"Liked everything Nice erotic story Just as i like"
It's a perfect title
"It's so nice ...I liked fact u explained everything I hope u can continue. ...don't leave us hanging we wanna know if the two will get married"
Hotz
"So steamy hotzz.. 🤩"
Staemy Business
"Really good story! Very good writing and so damn hot!"
Orvar
"Love the story because 1 it's HOT 2 Only 2 characters, so no complicated twista. 3 It's relatable. It can and probably is, literallly, someone's life right now. Thanks for a quick complete good read . "
Nice
"It was really good. Short and sweet."
First read in this app!!!!
"LOVED THIS WAY TO MUCH LMAO!!"
GREAT
"From start to finish. It had a great flow. The characters were endearing the sex was hot. Truthfully, it could’ve been a longer story and I would’ve still been happy with it."
Good reading
"Fun little romp. Good writing without typos! Loved that! "
Steamy Business
"I didn’t like this short sexy fluffy tale, unsurprisingly I absolutely LOVED it! As always, well written and addictive "
Love it
"A well written short story"
Wooow
"That was mind blowing. I really loved it. Great writing "
Oh. My. God.
"I wish i was experiencing it live while reading this"
Orc
"Love it. soooooo hoooot"
Woah!!
"That...was...amazing!!!! Sooooo good!!!"
Hot
"Brilliant story, brilliant writing so glad they finally got together."
AMAZINGLY AMAZING
"ITS JUST SOOO GOOD I CAN IMAGINE EVERY DESCRIPTIONS WITH WORDS AND VERY EASY TO READ AND VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN."
Wow!
"I loved the tension between the two characters. You could really feel the love and lust between them. I also loved the switch of perspective with the characters in each chapter. I'm finding the second book NOW!"
