Inkitt
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Short story

"Good short story. I love how simple it is. The grammar is also strong. We all need to believe that God is always watching.thank you for this hopeful story "

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"I think that the book is nice and interesting, though it could be better off with it being a short story because the chapters were too short. But other than that it's all fine I like the detectives persistence to find Allison. I like the fact that you portrayed how God really cares for us and shows it in many situations. Am a Christian so I really see the great worth in such few chapters. Thank you for the reminder of God's love🙂"

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