What is your opinion?
I like it
"I really love the flow a few mistakes here and there but it’s a good read "
Great!
"This story had me hooked from the second I started reading. Curious to know what else is going to happen at the camp site and what the unexpected visitor turns out to be! Great work very compelling "
Nice story
"your story is neat. I understand the flow and easy to read. Good work!"
The Last Adventure
"Overall, I think that this book so far is great as far as the story is concerned. You have many directions that you can potentially take this and you have a strong enough beginning to get you there. Please don't take the 3 stars on grammar personally. Grammar is something that is improved over time. You have a couple of run-on sentences and moments where quotations need to be moved around in order for the overall story to flow. Punctuation is good, and is another aspect that you can develop with more reading and writing. I wish you the best with your story :D"
Interesting premise with slow start
"I really like the idea of this and I know it's gonna take a bit to get started. Some of the paragraphs felt a little repetitive and I think there could be a bit more show and less tell about the dad w/Alzheimers. Other than that, really excited for this, great start with a little suspense, and I hope there's killer bears (like the cover)!"
Amazing
"I really like your work, unique and straight to the point. But imagine if the chapters were longer and if you were more descriptive, it would be more amazing than it already is, but it still doesn't affect the story so keep it up,cant wait for the horror part, Dan is already giving me the creeps. "
Fun but short
"It's a fun read, but each chapter feels a little short. Like more could be said. But it works, it leaves a lot to the imagination of the reader. Definitely worth a few minutes of my time."
