Tayla S Petalas

Wow!!!

This had my hooked! I loved it from start to finish. I devoured this and I'm sad it came to an end! Great plot strong characters loved it! Great work

Interesting Read

This is a first for me reading this style, It's interesting and kept me engaged. I was slightly confused at times with the past and future of the MFC but it's definitely a good read and great world-building. Great descriptions and a lot of details. Great work.

Something different

Great opening, loved how it started head strong female lead knows what she wants. Saddening she didn't listen to the warnings but great story so far and I'm interested to see where it goes.

Another great one

Again your story stories are great and really wish there was more! Loved it

Wish it wasn’t a short story

That was great and I really want to know more lol.. totally unexpected with their mermaid. Love it

Interesting

Great start had me wanting to keep reading. Strong characters great writing and overall intriguing.

I want more

Amazing story captivating hooked me in straight away and I am so ready to see what’s going to happen between these two now that they have to pretend they don’t know eachother. Can’t wait to keep reading

Compelling

Hooked from the get go! Read 3 chapters and the world building and descriptions of everything where so detailed.
Great work

Great first 3 chapters

There first 3 chapters were great, sad at times and lovely at others. The way Ryan remembers his late wife and every detail so sad. But kept me wanting to read more.

Great so far

This was definitely an interesting read and I am intrigued to no whats going to happen next. Some spelling and grammar are slightly off but that's understandable it happens. But overall a great read and can't wait for mor

Great writing

The author has really captured the scenery and feel or dark falls. It hooks you in and leaves you wanting more. Great writing, can't wait to see what happens next. Your style is easy to follow and the flow is great.

Love It!!!!

I love shifter books and this did not disappoint, The first 4 chapters and I want more. the storyline is great, and I want to know how this will play out. will they both be mated to Isa since the other twin hasn't felt anything yet? I am intrigued and eager to know more. Great writing great descriptions and detail. loved it can't wait for the rest

Great writing very captivating

I read the first 5 chapters and wow your writing is great sucks you in and keeps you wanting to know more. This isn't a genre i would normally read but it definitely got me interested. Very descriptive and detailed work world building great. Great work

Wow

This story is great, it lures you in and you just want to know more. I can’t wait to see what is going to happen next. Great story your writing is enjoyable and has a great flow, easy to follow. Love it

Great!

This story had me hooked from the second I started reading. Curious to know what else is going to happen at the camp site and what the unexpected visitor turns out to be!
Great work very compelling

Interesting

Something different.. interesting not what I normally read but could read more!
Keep up the good work

Umm wow

The first 4 chapters are amazing so detailed and the world building is next level! The story had my hooked and I can’t wait to continue. Such a change from a always having the good guys telling a story! Great work

Great!

First 3 chapters are amazing!
Drama conflict and coming to mural agreement! Can't wait to keep reading.. Writing style is great and very detailed
Well done

Great work

Great world-building and overall compelling story hooks you in and keeps you wanting to know more. 3 chapters ingreat so far.

Great story

3 chapters in and great! Loved it so much detail and such great descriptions of everything. Loved it can’t wait to continue reading

Wanting more

Read the first 3 chapters and the writing style is great very detailed and descriptive great storytelling cant wait to read more