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Dragonkin, Theo's Adventure

"A really great story. The characters are well developed. I really loved the way you went on after the evil God's were defeated to tell more of the aftermath of what happened to Theo and Cleo. Really this is just another example of why I love your books so much!"

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Theo's adventures

"Great story with a decent world building. Definitely one for the fantasy fans . But could do with some TLC from an editor …"

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Overall very good story

"The story is awesome but I've seen several places that slipped through the proof reading"

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Dragonkin

"Story rattles along at a good pace, descriptions of characters and locations are great, throw in some magic and you get a well rounded story"

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Wishing for more

"I wish there was more of the story written. "

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Great story

"I'm enjoying the characters and descriptions I can't wait to find out who theo is"

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Great game

"Another great game so far although are we going to be getting something like a dragon soon or maybe have Theo learn alchemy or smithing to create better potions/smithing "

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Keep up the work mate

"Love it mate"

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Dragonkin Theor adventure

"Have not read enough of the storyline "

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