Demon Birth

"A few good English errors. I didn't notice any spelling errors but the story is so gripping ..., and horrifying ... I don't think I was looking for technical errors. This author writes very clear pictures of what is necessary for the reader to "see" the story. Just enough environment to set a scene. The interplay of personalities is clear and Angelique's fear is palpable. Clear plot development, excellent character development, just enough back story to make it believable. Seriously, if you are NOT easily frightened please give this a critical read, if you are easily frightened or upset by gore maybe you should let this one pass."