What is your opinion?
Incredible plot
"Never having read anything like this, this book lured me in with interesting characters and an intriguing plot. Makoto as an MC is difficult to understand at first, but driven by a clear need I can relate to on a deep level. He is at times mean, but is fleshed out well throughout the story. Sometimes it was clear that this is an unedited story, but it did not ruin the experience for me. It is obvious that S.K has a clear vision of this story and how the scenes play out. Some were easy to follow, while others were a bit difficult. I think we share this trait, as I too see scenes play out in my head, assuming the reader may see it as I do. Without spoilers, the ending left me wanting more of the characters because I fell in love with the dynamic that grew. "
Gorgeous writing
"This is poetry weaved into storytelling. A lot of the descriptions were such that I had to stop and take a second to appreciate the merging of words that I had never seen put together before. Sometimes I had to slow down or read a passage again to understand what the author was saying or describing, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. The characters were so well fleshed out, and the MC's struggles were added another interesting layer to the story. It also made the ending that much more bittersweet. There were some grammar issues, but I'm not harping on that since it does say in the title this is unedited, so I'll leave it alone. The only thing I would point out is I noticed sometimes the switching of pronouns for Zenjirou from "they" to "he." There's not much more I can add but to say this is truly a work of art, and I think this is a book that could easily appeal to anyone. "
Great start to an equally great adventure!
"The Court of Rooks is definitely a story that reflects the author's vast imagination. The world is stitched together with every paragraph, and is vivid like you're watching a movie! A lot of thought was put into constructing every piece of it along Makoto's adventures, which I've really come to admire. What drew me in right away was the dialogue. I found myself laughing at some of the exchanges between Makoto and the others. The level of sass these characters have is unmatched, and I absolutely LOVED it. I think this is a great start to the story, but there is still work to be done to it. I did find the plot a bit confusing at times, often causing me to go back and reread. The writing style is quick and to the point, which allows lots of action and detail to take place. As for grammar, there weren't too many consistent mistakes that stood out to me, so that's good!! Would love to read it again when it's fully edited! I know there's a lot more in store for Makoto, Taiki, and Zenjirou, so I'll keep on reading. Can't wait to see what projects are next!"
Japanse folklore-based fantasy with potential.
"I was really conflicted writing this review. I loved the concept. The execution not so much. I was floored by the writing in some parts. And the others... not so much. Let me try and explain why. Part one pf the story is titled Ikigai, a Japanese term that blends two words: “iki” “to live,” and “gai” “reason,” ergo “a reason to live.” I suggest adding a note explaining this the readers. Not everyone who reads the story will know that. I found most of my readers enjoy the content and titbits. The word means little if they don't get what it symbolizes. In the first 10 chapters, the MC, Makoto, a runaway is chosen as a forest guide who leads spirits trapped in the forest to their final destination. He gets a hare/ rabbit mask, and two helpers, Kitsune who is angry coz he's decided Makoto is unworthy, and the bubbly fox Zenjiroe. Some of these are elements I am familiar with (having working in Tokyo for over 6 years and deep diving into the myths and lore) so I should have loved the story. I have mulled over why I was not invested as heavily (which usually happens in such tales). Apart from not grounding the myths and cultural symbolism, I failed to connect to Makoto. His emotional state, even reactions are so muted, that he seems to be going through the motions. Things happen. Maybe emphasise on the whys and hows, not just what; show us what Makoto feels and thinks. Incidents with Miya and Makoto at his grandfather's grave are exceptions. They're also proof the author has skills to draw readers in with such scenes. They're emotional and beautifully written. There is an undeniable lyrical quality in the later chapters but it's lost in the mass of mundane in the telling of events. In my line of work, we call that burying the lead. :) The author undoubtedly has the skills and all the elements of a great story in the making. In my opinion, all this story need is a self-edit to trim the fat for the writing and the story to shine. Maybe adding a bit more cultural context for less aware readers will help too. I also suggest presenting readers with a more relatable version of Makoto with a purpose (other than helping the spirits) through his feelings, and his growth as an individual. In no way is any of this meant to discouraging but my opinion on how the story can be amazing. "
