Murder Train
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Murder Train

This story contains themes of: assault, depression, extreme violence gore, self-harm, torture, violent death

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Story Notes

This story may not be suitable for some people. Only read if you are fine with murder and minor cussing. You have been warned!

Summary

This is the first book of a book series that I will make called “Murder mysteries”. Murder train is about a group of people who get on a subway train and find out that soon it would become a murder train. Everything was normal until the lights flickered off. Everyone wondered what was happening and then soon that wonder turned into fear when the lights flickered back on. There it was. A body of a dead woman was sitting in a pool of blood in the middle of the train car. Read the story to find out who the murderer is - and who survives. (This is my first story please read. thanks a lot and enjoy :) )

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The beginning of a horror train ride

“Alex hurry up or we’ll be late!” Yelled Max. “I can’t run! These bags are too heavy!” Max stopped running and walked over to Alex and took one of her bags. “Is that better?” Max said as he rolled his eyes. “Yes! Thank you so much.” Alex said. She then pecked him on the cheek. Max blushed. “Lets hurry up!” She said as she started to run. Max hurried after her and when they got there the train was sitting there waiting for them. They hurried on and sat at the back of the car. Just then, two girls, one who had black hair in a big ponytail with red tips, and the other with short blonde hair and a butterfly clip. They looked totally different. “I told you you shouldn’t have bought those anime figures!” The girl with the black hair said as she slapped the back of the blonde girls head. “I couldn’t pass up the opportunity! That Nezuko figurine was just so cute!” Said the blonde girl. “Then why did you also buy all the other figurines?” Asked the black haired girl. “It was Dazai and Gojo. Who the hell would pass up Dazai and Gojo?!” The blonde girl pouted as the two sat in the seat in front of Alex and Max. “Bathroom… bathroom…” a boy with brown hair and big round glasses mumbled as he made his way to the front of the train car. He then bumped into another man wearing an acdc shirt and baggy ripped jeans. “Sorry!” The guy with big glasses said as he hurried off. But before he could leave, the guy with the acdc shirt grabbed the other guy with glasses arm. “Watch where your going you ass. If you bump into me again I’m going to throw you onto the train tracks you hear?” “Yes sir!” The guy with the glasses responded. The mean guy let go of his arm and the guy with the glasses hurried off. “That was quite rude you know.” Said a girl next to the mean guy. “Who the hell are you?” The guy said annoyed. “My names Elizabeth. You?” “Why should I tell you my name?” “Because I told you mine.” Responded the girl. The guy raises his eyebrow and says “Jason. Jason is my name.” The girl smiles. “Nice to meet you, Jason. Next time you better be nice or I’ll throw YOU on the train tracks haha!” Jason growls. “Kidding! Kidding. Haha.” A woman in a wheelchair comes on the train before the train starts to move. Alex notices and gets up to help the woman. “Ah! Thank you so much.” Says the woman in the wheelchair. “No problem.” Says Alex as she pushes the woman into a handicap spot. When Alex turns away, she catches another woman glaring at the woman in the wheelchair. The woman in the wheel chair notices and she grows a worried expression on her face. The woman in the wheelchair quickly looks away. Alex shrugs and walks back over to her seat. Then, the train started to move. 10 minutes into the long train ride, a man walked over to the girl with the red tips. The girl looks up. “What? Why are you looking at me like that?” She said. “Becaue your cute.” He says as he winks at her. “What…” she says disgusted. “Sorry, not interested.” She then rolls her eyes and pushes him away. “Come on, go on at least one date with me!” And he scooches closer to her. “I said n-!” Just then, the lights started to flicker and the train started to go slower. Then, the lights turned off. “What’s happening?” Said a voice. *Flick, flick, flick, flick* the lights then turned on. “That was weird.” Said the girl with blonde hair. Everyone was quiet until Alex gasped. Alex became terrified and pointed. There it was. The body of the girl in the wheelchair. She was lying there in a pool of blood in front of her. She was dead.

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Chapter Notes

WARNING: this chapter contains death and may not be suitable for for some people.
Emilynolikepeople
Emilynolikepeople

bc I can’t think lolll

3 years
Emilynolikepeople
Emilynolikepeople

Also who do you think it is

3 years

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