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Great story

"It kept me interested through the whole story. I like that it is a short story but thankfully there is a sequel. "

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Great book

"Even when it is serious, you manage to get a laugh in... wauw! I really had a great time reading it, and sometimes i laughed so hard my hubby came looking🫣😁. Can't wait for the next one.... and for not explaining everything: sometimes it's good to leave some questions answered... especially when there are multiple books coming... it didn't bother me..."

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Amazing!

"Amazing story! I was on the edge on my seat the whole time and could not stop reading! I loved the plot and twists in this story blew me away. I also fell in love with the characters while reading this story and I am so very excited to read the sequel. "

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Ravenfire

"Delightful fantasy story. Full of drama and intrigue "

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Couldn't put this novel down...2:55a mission accompled

"Intriguing plot that can't wait to delve more into "

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My Opinion

"I liked the characters! They are interesting and funny. The idea of the school and how they connect with one another is like any normal school. Add magic and it’s a winner!"

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Beautiful story

"The mystery, setting, and plit are very good. There are some plotholes, and a lot if tell instead of show. That is all fixable. The creativity and story is not, and the writer has that in abundance. Thank you for writing and sharing your story!"

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