Mind trip
"So much went on to have her wake up "
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"So much went on to have her wake up "
"I loveeeeeeeeeeeee ittttttt"
"I have recommended everyone on my Facebook, but I would recommend anyone to read."
"Thank you for writing this story. To me it is heart felt."
"Had many twists to the story that had you thinking. "
"The plot is good but the writing feels really rushed. It just jumps to the next scene with proper description. It really doesn't flow smoothly. Could be great with a little more work "