project romance

"This chapter touched me more than I expected. The way you portrayed grief, confusion, and the emptiness that comes after losing someone felt incredibly raw and human. I especially felt the weight of the narrator trying to process everything while everyone around him seemed to expect him to be strong. Sometimes grief is not tears. Sometimes it is silence, numbness, confusion, and simply trying to understand what happened. I also appreciate that the characters are not portrayed as perfect. Their complicated feelings make the story feel real and relatable. There is so much emotional potential in this story, and I am genuinely curious to see how this loss changes Jeff and the people around him. Keep writing and keep trusting your story. You have created an emotional beginning that makes the reader want to understand what happens next"