Inkitt
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Bad Boy Roman

"What a great ending to a terrific story! It had it all, Great job!"

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More please

"We need more of the story please put it in there"

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Bad Boy Roman

"I can never get enough of these two!"

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Love it

"Love it I’ve love"

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Lucky Star

"Good story. I'm lost as to why Roman wants to hurt the Baxters? Was one of the guys killed for kidnapping sapphire his dad?? Seeing a few typos...but still loving the story. "

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Great

"Enjoying it so far. looking to reading more chapters."

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Amazing

"Love the characters and the setting and just a few grammar errors but other than that it's spicy af"

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Roman

"Really liking novel so far would definitely recommend to friends "

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Hysterical

"I swear I can't stop laughing! The characters are so life like I can actually see this playing out!"

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Good plot but would like the character of Star to be less naive. I like the dominate male characters but feel like the females come off looking stupid.

"I would recommend this to someone who enjoys an adult theme and dominate male characters."

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