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What happens when a girl meets the one she loves and he goes away?

"Well that's how this story starts, but its no orinary "boy meets girl" story. There are a lot of twists and turns, but true love and the mating bond win out in the end. "

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Wow

"Very good book"

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Yes to book 2

"Really enjoyed this. Thanks author!"

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Loved it

"Its fun its short and i love it. "

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Loved this!

"I would have commented throughout, but I binged this and couldn’t do more than click love this and the other smileys. I loved Phoebe and Magnus and Panda (I know I will butcher the spelling.) and the addition of Tobias was shocking. I kind of guessed early on she had 2 mates, but the 3rd was a surprise! I loved Gemma and Delilah and hated Blake and the fake woman whose name I don’t remember. I was pissed when Panda slept with Blake. I was also pissed at how Magnus was sleeping with everyone he could to hurt Phoebe. What a stubborn man! I really loved all of this and I love your writing and the stories you share! I can’t wait to read more of your work and for all the updates on your current works! 💜"

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Unique and Well-Written

"First, I have to say that this was an extremely well-thought-out story, and the characters were amazingly 3-dimensional. I binged this read and enjoyed it from start to finish. Second, I thoroughly enjoyed that twist at the end. It was done very well, and just seemed to fit. Honestly, if the description had included it, I probably would've skipped it, but I'm glad it didn't because I would have missed out. Lastly, yeah there were some grammar and spelling, but not enough to annoy me or really stand out. There are some stories where it's like a record scratch reaction where it takes me out of the story, but this was not one of those. Thanks for the story!"

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Something different and very original

"A second book would be great, i honestly am more into the relationship/family stage of a story than the conquest and then the end type of story. But i can't wait to see what else you come up with."

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Short story, loved it & reeled me right to the finish line ❤️

""Can you love more than one mate if you found out that instead one, it's three shifters as your mates?" Absolutely 💯❤️ Phoebe gets three mates who are shifters... Magnus, Pantelis, and Tobias. Somehow, they all make it work out in the end because the bond of a mate is important that you only get one true mate who really gets you. And sticks through the good, the bad, the happy and the sad. Even through heartbreak..... Phoebe is fiesty who knows to stand her own ground. Yet, be strong with a backbone like a woman should. What her three mates turned into, I gotta say they are beautiful creatures. Their love story is a unique love story that I immediately reel into reading from the prologue alone. It's short but worth the read if you love fantasy stories, you'll love this. The raw feelings and raw emotions are there. This isn't your all smut full book because finding a mate comes with its own problems that need to be solved the mature way. Honestly, that is another reason I loved reading this story, too, cause the author really put those smut scenes at the right time, knowing there's a time and place for everything. There are grammars but it didn't bother me to stop reading it or keep me less interested. At times, I'll admit, I wanted to slap some sense into her mates for the wrongs they committed, yet Phoebe did it all by herself 😆😆 by being the fierce woman she is. I'd recommend to anyone to read this story. Give the author a try, and you won't regret it 😉 😊🙂😉♥️💯. Thank you for sharing your book with readers all over the world. You've got talent to make a good book by keeping us captivated for the ending. "

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Fox

"Compelling plot with nice twists and cliffhangers. There were a few grammatical errors but other than that it was a great reverse harem type of story. "

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Foxes Equinox

"I loved this book and once I started reading it I couldn't put it down. I was up late reading this book. Excellent writing and I would do look forward to reading more from this book. ❤️💯😎😍"

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Great story

"I really liked the storyline and all the characters. It was just too short ;)"

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Foxes Equinox

"What a unique story! Loved it so much I couldn't put it down until I was finished. Will definitely be looking for more of your work! "

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Foxes Equinox

"I loved this book. It's one of the best paranormal romance books I've read on Inkitt this year. You truly are an amazing writer."

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Awesome Writing

"Reverting and captivating!!"

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Exciting and can’t wait to read more!

"Not fully through the book yet, but can’t wait to read more. There’s an occasional typo here and there, but other than that the characters are fascinating and the plot intriguing. Great stuff with just the right amount of spiciness!"

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Sank my teeth into this from the 1st chapter.

"The new chapters are great I need more. I need to know how she has 3 mates. "

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