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Great story so far! Especially if you love high fantasy ~

"I love what I have read so far. Usually, it takes me some time to settle into high fantasy as I need to get used to a bunch of new terms and whatnot. However, this story seems to balance all of that very well, and I could read without feeling overwhelmed by information. There is also a lot of great dialogue and the clever use of story-specific language sprinkled through the narrative. I can already tell this will be one of those books that you can't put down! (I'm not sure why it says I have only read one chapter?)"

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The girl & the ghost king

"Honestly I’m really not a girl that’s into fantasy books. Romance for sure but not fantasy, I usually get lost quickly and very confused. This was written in a way which that didn’t happen, which was a first for me. The imagination is adding beautifully to what hopes to be a blossoming romance. Also such a fan of the characters names!! Working on descriptive language/ punctuation and grammar is something I’m learning to develop my skills on and reading a book where this is done so well truly helps. Look forward to reading more by this wonderful author. X"

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