What is your opinion?
Kudos for writing such a masterpiece
"Kudos for writing such a masterpiece. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks. Only 40 spots are left."
So Far
"Since the story isn't done yet, I can't give a full score, but I believe the plot is very interesting so far. You know a great deal about African Wildlife and hunting habits of poachers. My tips to you are as follows. When describing things, if you notice the same word being used in multiple sentences (I.E grass, lion) try to use another noun. If that's too difficult, I understand. I encounter the same problem sometimes! When you were describing the rhino scene in the prologue, it was very interesting to see it from the child rhino's perspective. But I read that having a prologue in your book will make it very hard right off the bat to get it published. You could easily call the prologue the first chapter and so on and so forth. It's all up to what you decide to do though! It was an interesting concept so far, I can't wait to read more."
