What is your opinion?
Nikki's Review
"The author's exceptional ability to craft a unique world, complete with original creatures and races, is truly commendable. The attention to detail adds depth and richness to the story, making it a captivating experience. Keep an eye on Kiya, as her development unfolds at a satisfying pace. The writing style is both accessible and engaging."
Love the Visuals - Well Spent Time
"Well crafted fantasy world, I like that you've made so many of your own creatures and tribes. I'll keep reading more but I like what I'm reading so far and love love love the story art. Reading this is time well spent :)"
Wow!
"In the beginning, she urges you it's a first draft but it doesn't read like one! There are only tiny grammatical errors but they don't hinder the flow whatsoever. First off, I loved Kiya. This YA has intricate worldbuilding, angst, and lore with a main character who is both badass and also expresses vulnerability. The plot is compelling (dare I say, revenge?) and the sense of mystery in each chapter leaves you wanting more! Well done. I can't wait to read more."
Wonderful start!
"From what I've read so far, this book is outstanding for a first draft. The worldbuilding is rich and well-incorporated--there's more of "showing" instead of "telling," and the little notes at the beginning of each chapter are a nice way to explain a little about the world you've built without droning on about it in the actual story. Kiya's character is very easy to root for as we see her throughout her adventures. I also ADORE the addition of Cub; little animal sidekicks are my favourites and I absolutely love when authors include them in stories. Your descriptions are vivid and clear--overall a very engaging story :) One thing I'd like to suggest is perhaps splitting each chapter into two. The chapters were quite extensive (which isn't a bad thing!!), and the only reason I'm suggesting this is because of this being an online book. Readers feel more inclined to read shorter chapters since it adds tension, I suppose :) There were also a few grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, but I assume these are just because you haven't really edited through yet. No worries! They can be fixed quickly. Looking forward to reading more :)) Well done!"
A Good Story I've Read in a While on Inkitt
"Love the book. It was well written. The story plot was well thought and the writer did a pretty good job at showing it."
Soulsinger
""Soulsinger" is shaping up to be a captivating fantasy tale that masterfully weaves together elements of suspense, mysticism, and deep emotional connections. The author's portrayal of the Vargr tribe's customs and the mysterious golden affliction on Kiya's fingers adds layers of intrigue. While the book is still in its writing phase, the chapters so far promise a story that is both engaging and thought-provoking. Highly anticipating the unfolding of this tale! "
Soulsinger
"The note at the beggining that said this story "sucked" didn't leave me expecting much, but. Wow. Althought it's in the works, Soulsinger might just be one of the most intruiging fantasy pieces I've read. And the worldbuilding??? It's absolutely amazing how there's unique terms for everything. Reading Soulsinger is like stepping into a completely different world, with different customs, and different ways of life. Its unimagineably unique. Kiya's character is really well written, and her reactions to the new changes in her life define how her personality will develop throughout the book. Can't wait for this to be finished!"
