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A masterpiece worthy of all 5 Stars!

"🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 This is a story that’s definitely worth every star, I would give it 10 stars out of 5. I loved everything about the characters, the twists and turns, the way it could have you on the edge of your seat, biting all of your nails one minute then feeling a bit hot under the collar and horny the next. The author should be proud of themselves, because they have created a real special novel here, the storytelling is exquisite, and is uniquely timeless. I would like to say on behalf of all the bookworms, thank you for creating such a magnificent novel. If there is a book you should read this year, make sure you delve into this one and allow yourself to be immersed into the world of Gabe and Jess. You will not regret it! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟"

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Amazing vampire story

"I’m obsessed with this book. I’m rereading my favorite chapters and really looking forward for more. Really curious about how they’ll deal with Jess’s mortality though. Gabe is so hot 🥵 "

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Virgie's

"Loving the relationships among Jess, Gabe, Rainer, and Jessica. They are truly family. Wonder if Selene will come around to a better way of thinking. Poor Ramos has to deal with her kind of love.."

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What the actual fuck??

"This is the best book I've ever read on this site! I literally have no words! The plot, the characters, the emotion, the detail was absolutely outstanding in the story 🥹😭 YOU did such a wonderful job!!! I haven't been invested in a book on this site in awhile. Thank you for sparking my joy for reading back ❤️ I loved this book and I won't find another like this! Thank you and let God bless your soul"

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Excellent storytelling

"A great suspenseful plot wrapped up in a fantasy romance novel. Great job!"

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This story is a must-read if you love vampires!

"I love Jess and Gabe, their attraction to each other is sinful. I love the humor in the story, it makes me giggle. The twists and turns keep you hooked! Highly recommend if you love everything vampires, which I do. Cheers!"

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Safe Place

"I was utterly enthralled by this story! An emotional roller-coaster for sure! Tears, laughter, suspense, hatred, just name it! Brilliant writing by the author "

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Safe place

"This story is just fantastic! Beautifully written, characters you can fall in love with (or hate!) A handful of spelling mistakes but I'll blame auto correct as it's the same word - rouge when it should be rogue- as my own phone and tablet constantly 'auto correct' those two words too 🙄 Did not want this story to end - I forced myself to only read a couple of chapters each day, otherwise I would have devoured it over a weekend. Excited to see two more stories from this universe waiting to be read 😁"

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Wholesome, Delicate, BEAUTIFUL story!

"The author built an extremely in-depth world full of well-rounded thoughtout characters. She writes so consistently and weaves together a generous plot with enough spice mixed in to keep you addicted to the budding romance between Jess and Gabe. Every piece of action builds their love, trust and respect for one another. Gabe is a sexy, moody vamp who learns to drop his shields around Jess, who gets swept violently into his world. Gabe protects her throughout it all. He is a devilishly, sexy hero. The world itself is poised to erupt into so many directions, I can only fathom what the author has planned next and can't wait to see this series develop further. Thank you for this warm, cozy read. And of course, I can't-not mention the SUPER hot, sexy banter and steamy sex scenes that will make you completely obsessed with their classic dynamic. I hear down the pipeline there is some crossover happening in the future with Lady Nefalum's Come, Let Us Prey [smirks] that is going to be so f*ing epic! Also, so happy to have made a friend with you, DaniBrown xo thank you for sharing your world with us on Inkitt!!"

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Safe place

"Great book, plot was written well. Many twist and turns."

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Safe Place

"I’m a native of New Orleans, a city filled with voodoo, witches and vampires. Anne Rice has always been a favorite of mine, Lestat before the cheesy movie, her yearly vampire balls and my collection of hard cover first editions that I waited in line to have autographed mean the world to me. I read and watched the sparkly vampire with my teenage daughter but it wasn’t really my thing. I believe that I’ve found my new favorite. This story is compelling. The characters and scenery are well rounded and have depth. I’m getting ready to read the new novella and I can’t wait. I hope your characters visit New Orleans in the future. "

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Truly Amazing Story!

"I loved and enjoyed this story very much. The plot and the characters were truly a masterpiece. Thank you! "

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first Night

"I can't wait for the 2nd part of this book does anyone know about when it ill be out"

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Honestly a fucking excellent book

"You will DEFINITELY not be bored by this! I'm not into the whole vampire theme but this book was soooooooo damn good! I couldn't even make a comment at any chapters because I just wanted to read and not be sidetracked! I don't even want to spoil it for anyone reading this review. Just go read the book please. There must be a part 2 because Frankie is not giving up his best creation to Andy so easily. The character development was so good and you could feel the emotions from all the fictional people, even Selene and Remus. Think I love Ramah the most as a character. He and Nyssa need their own book because I need a back story on Alistair too. I was so engrossed in this book because the writing was soooooo well done which I appreciated immensely, author took their time to write this! Netflix, Hulu, Peacock or any other platform, please turn this into a mini series. I would definitely watch! Thanks author for this masterpiece!"

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Love it!

"Lovely story! Looking for the next book!"

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Good read

"I really enjoyed reading this book. It created a range of emotions in me all the way through. There are some grammatical errors, but paragraphs still flowed well. Some of the dialogue between the 2 main characters was a bit 'cheesy' at times, and the repetition of some keywords throughout didn't seem necessary. However, I would definitely recommend this book. There were times when I just didn't want to put it down. Looking forward to the next book!"

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Safe place

"The novel was fantastic,so emotional,lovely and interesting ,I can't wait to read FIRST NIGHT"

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I really enjoyed this story

"I love so much about this book. I love that it is a big, fat, juicy read. I love the different take on vampire lore. The characters are great, as are spicy scenes, and just the storyline in general. Not a typical vampire read, much better. "

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Safe place

"The story was awesome I absolutely loved it."

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Big Fish in a Small Pond!!!

"Finding this book was a pleasant surprise. This is the most well written work I've come across in a long time on this app or elsewhere. I wholeheartedly believe that this novel would be commercially successful. It's ready for publishing or even for the big screen. The author deserves to be handsomely paid for her creativity. I look forward to more work from the author because I know her artistic choices are sound. Dani has a loyal reader in me."

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