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Cutest Story

"Very funny and enjoyable story. The story seems rushed at the end. Please tie up the story. 1) Whatever happened to Pizzaboy, he suddenly disappeared. 2) Whatever happened to Eric/Erek.Did his grandma ever find out that they broke up a year ago. 3) Her parents, mum and brothers. 4) His family, did they ever meet her as Reed's girlfriend. 5) Whatever happened to Satan the cat. Need a few more chapters to tie up the story. NK, I really enjoy your stories. Keep up with your writing, you are a good author. "

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Casper and Charley

"Thank you for sharing this sweet story. I wish you could if had her resolve her body image issues. Self acceptance is important to have no mater who you are."

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Good read, ignore the grammar mistakes!

"This is a good story and I like the author's style. Just ignore the spelling and grammar mistakes. It would be good though that she clearly defines a change of time or scene because somethings you think things come one after another but in context, either some time or a location has changed. But otherwise, good story."

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A few issues..

"I am on chapter eight so far. I absolutely love it so far. But, grammar needs major work. I have to go back and re-read a sentence due to words being used incorrectly or words being spelled wrong or words that are there that shouldn’t be there. But besides that, great book so far!"

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Great

"Grammar and syntax are in bad shape, but plot and characters are great."

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Good but a little bit of bad grammar and spelling

"I like the plot and story but I think you should reread and recheck because of some obvious spelling and grammar mistakes that can make it a bit of a difficult read."

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Too Fat for Love

"Excellent reading couldn’t put it down had to finish reading it"

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Too Fat For Love

"Funny story. Loved it! Just spelling and phrasing of word. Time and place jumps.... got confusing. What happened to Liam? Erek just drop out pic? Would love to read what happens......so Reed and violet ever get intimate??"

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The story is very addicting and light to read i loved it so much , i would like to read more from this writer

"The story was very light and easy to read i felt like i was inside of it , its really addicying i read it in like a day and a half really fun and nice book "

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Funny warm story

"Loved this story. The female lead was funny and down to earth. The plot was relatable and flowed right along without having any dull spots."

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To Fat For Love

"I really got captivated by the book and needed to know more. The plot was amazing and even took me by suprise. Very well written "

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Love

"I absolutely love this so far"

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Too Fat For Love

"This was a good story 💗💗❤️❤️"

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Excellent

"Its very interesting i love it"

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Too fate for love

"I love how relatable this story is. I wish there was more actually. I felt very connected and entranced reading the chapters. A few errors along the way, but you get the drift of what it meant. Thank you for a great 'Reed' (sorry, had to do a joke/pun like what was throughout the book)"

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Too Fat for Love

"A quick moving story full of wit! Stupendously wonderful dialogue and amazing sense of hilarious bantering! Thank You!"

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Too fat for lovee

"Nice plot amaz8ng chrater development i love theèèèèe story"

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recommended. a must

"love it. funny, romantic, sarcastic just like i love"

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Too Fat For Love

"I liked this book. Funny and charming. I love the realness to the characters. I just wish we could stop talking about women who are a size 12 being fat. That's my only complaint. The book was great fun, and I could not put it down."

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Fun flirty romance

"You paint such a great picture with your words! I am a bit obsessed with Violet AND Reed! They volley of their conversations, interactions, and relationship makes me want to know them in real life. There are minor misspellings throughout, but that is easy to pass on as I want to read this as quick as I can to find out more about them and their lives! "

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