Echo's by Yuki Aya Masahiko at Inkitt
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Summary

A Detective Must solve a string of murders. Finding out that a serial killer is on the loose. Him and his partner, Work together into solving this crime. [Det.Gami] There is a horrible case I am currently working on... If you love Murder and mystery... You will love this... Join me and my partner in hopes of finding the serial killer at large.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Beginning

Suddenly A knock at the door, Shin stands up and answers the door. Standing in front of him is a tall man with a trench coat and a top hat.

[Det.Gami] Can I help you?

[Herrold Dean] Det. Gami, We have several dead bodies that turned up.

[Det.Gami] Show me where!

They leave the office building of Det.Gami, Getting into Herrold’s car. Pulling away as fast as they could, Once arriving at the park, They are met by Det. Moonking.

[Det.Moonking] I am so glad you guys made it, It was such a horrible scene... I got here about thirty minutes ago.

[Det.Gami] How many bodies?

[Det.Moonking] Three, All have been female...Looks like possible torture.

Herrold hands Det.Gami a file, He walks away getting back into his car driving away. Det.Gami walks over to the first victim and starts investigating her death.

[Det.Moonking] Shin... I mean Det.Gami... What do you think happened here?

[Det.Gami] I am thinking A possible serial killer... By the looks of it, The cause of death looks like brutal trauma to the skull. Not sure till the coroner has a look at them.

Det.Moonking starts writing down notes of what Det.Gami was telling her. She walks up to the ambulance men and lets them know to take the bodies. The Ambulance guys start clearing up the bodies, While samples of evidence get taken. Shin puts his hand up to his chin trying to think of the murder.

[Det.Moonking] Detective, Maybe we should discuss this over some coffee? It is going to be a long day.

[Det.Gami] Yeah, Good Idea...

Det. Gami gets in Det.Moonkings car, She begins to pull out and drive to a nearby Lounge. The place is called Restless Lounge a 24hr bar that also serves breakfast, beer, and entertainment. Once they arrive it begins to darken outside, They get out of the car and enter the lounge. A waitress walks up to them and shows them to a seat, They sit down opening their menus.

[Det.Gami] So what do you want? My treat...

[Det.Moonking] Just some coffee, With cream and sugar.

As the waitress walks back over she takes their orders, But the waitress stopped staring at Det.Gami.

[Waitress] Oh..My..God! Shin?

[Det.Gami] Sam?...

[Samantha] It is you! How are you doing?

[Det.Gami] Good... By the way, This is my partner, Det. Celeste Moonking.

[Samantha] Hi, Celeste...

Samantha hands him her number, Then she takes their order and returns with their coffee.

[Samantha] Give me a call sometime, Hun...

[Det.Gami] Sure will...

Det.Gami and Samantha smile at each other as she walks away. They begin to sip on coffee, Det.Moonking puts the folder onto the table.

[Det.Moonking] The girl... Samantha... She is kinda pretty, How long did you two know each other?

[Det.Gami] I don’t wanna talk about it, Let’s get back to what we are doing.

[Det.Moonking] What are your thoughts?

[Det.Gami] It is possibly a serial killer...

[Det.Moonking] Did forensics contact you yet?

[Det.Gami] Not...

Right as he started to say it, His phone begins to beep. He lifts up his phone checking the msg.

-Message-

[Herrold Dean] I need to speak with you and Det.Moonking, It is about the bodies that were found at the park.

-END-

[Det.Gami] We need to meet Harrold at the forensics center.

They drink their coffee and stand up, Det.Gami looks over at Samantha and winks at her. She smiles back as both him and Det.Moonking leave. Getting back into the car, They pull out heading to the Forensics building. They both get out of the car, Heading into the building. They walk up to the receptionist she lifts her head up looking at Det.Gami.

[Receptionist] Ah...Yes, Mr. Herrold is waiting for you both. Please go right in!

Det.Gami and Det.Moonking enters into Herrold's office but they do not see him yet. They stand around near his desk When finally he enters. He pushes up his glasses and pulls the file from his filing cabinet.

[Det. Gami] So... What have you got for us?

[Herrold Dean] You were right, It was blunt force trauma to the head. But there was more...

[Det.Moonking] What was that?

[Herrold Dean] Not only that, But they were subjected to torture.

[Det.Gami] From how damaged the bodies were, I kinda already figured that.

[Herrold Dean] Yes, Well... They were brutely raped,Burned, Stuck with a pin above the buttocks. Which all implied it was kinda like a sick game was played with them.

[Det.Moonking] Huh...That is so horrible...

[Det.Gami] Thank you, Please send over everything you found out. We need to catch this fucker...

[Det.Moonking] Let's get some rest, And meet up back at the lounge?

[Det.Gami] Sure... Just take me home, Since my car is still in the shop.

They laugh a little and head out to get into the car, But as they were about to get in, Someone walks over to them.

[Police Woman] Hey! Shin!

[Det.Gami] Hey, Alice... We are kinda busy...

[Alice price] You never call me anymore, Did I do something wrong?

Det.Gami gets in the car fast and locks the door having Det.Moonking gets in. They drive off as fast as they could go, As they arrive at Det.Gami's house she looks over at him.

[Det.Moonking] What was that all about?

[Det.Gami] A one night stand, She thinks that we are in love.

[Det.Moonking] Shin, You really gotta be careful... Love can be very blind...

[Det.Gami] Yeah... Yeah...

[Det.Moonking] Don't, Yeah...Yeah... Me.

Det. Gami gets out of her car, Det.Moonking yells out to him.

[Det.Moonking] Get some sleep, You look exhausted.

Det.Gami goes up to his house unlocking the front door, But he begins to get a migraine. Once Det.Gami gets the door open he heads in and grabs his medicine. Then walks over to the fridge grabbing a bottle of beer. Returning to the living room he sits down in his recliner looking at the case files. Det.Gami begins to fall asleep, As he was going over the case files they fell out of his hands.

-Dream-

Det.Gami wakes up in a dark hallway, He hears women screaming for it to stop. Det.Gami begins to walk further down the hall when he sees a shadow figure.

[Det.Gami] Hey! Stop!

But the screams get louder and as he looks up at the ceiling, He saw three women with their eyes torn out and bleeding. They are naked and crying, He begins to step back and trying to breathe. Then suddenly a hand grabs his shoulder and he snaps out of it. And the dream ends...

[Det.Gami] Huh... *pants*

He begins to rub his eyes, Looking up and notices it is now daylight. Looking at the time he rushes to grab the files off the floor throwing on a tie. Then heads out the door getting on the bus to the garage. Once he arrives they just open up, Walking over to the mechanic.

[Det.Gami] Is my car ready?

[Mechanic] Yes, It took a lot of work...But it is ready. How did you get so much red paint on the inside of the trunk?

[Det.Gami] Having some work done on a friends car, They need a repaint.

[Mechanic] Ah, Ok... Well she is already.

[Det.Gami] Thank you...

Det.Gami gets in his car and drives off, Pulling up to The Restless Lounge.








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