What is your opinion?
Confusion
"Liam's identify unveiled has set in motion like a pack of domino a lot of events and twisted plot as the story unravels "
I loooove it.
"I love it!It kept me up all night! Can't wait to see what happens next!"
Bloodlust
"Very nice book"
Is it possible for Venice to have two mates from different worlds?
"I like the novel because you can't predict what will happen next, and I dislike the fact that Venice can't help herself in the supernatural world. I would recommend this story to my cousin and friends. I rated this story the way I did because I love it because it's a supernatural story."
Blood lust
"Loved it the plot was good loved the characters 👌 "
The Vampire’s Desire
"This story was so good! Venice was a tough human. She endured so much. Will you do a sequel of Vivian’s and her true father? Possibly a supernatural donor named Macay? Wouldn’t that be spicy?🌶️ "
10/10
"As a long time reader I read the first addition . This rewrite is 10/10!! "
Eleanor is not nice at all.. what an interesting novel
"What a interesting story woow.. goood job Liam for saving your soulmate"
OMGSH
"THIS IS AMAZING!"
Great
"Love this story it’s great best one yet"
She is Ready!
"I am ready for him to mark her! This is a wonderful story and I am hooked. Can't wait for more!"
Promising Author
"Only a couple of mix-ups and misspelling errors, which is pretty darn good! Story line kept me interested. Some unresolved issues give room for more versions. Overall I am satisfied. Good story!"
Thank You, Author! 💜
"Thank you, author! This is the first story I ever read on this app. And I really enjoyed reading this! I'm for Team Freedom for our bbgirl Venice haha but I'm happy she got a happy ending that she wanted! Maybe some points that I noticed that could've been better were: - the typos, misspelled or misused words - the characters' histories. To show how their current decisions would make sense. To perhaps help capture the reader's empathy/relatedness with the character. - showing the other characters' relevance from start to finish. I just felt like the other characters were left hanging, like they were just there to be challenges that the main roles needed to overcome The things that I liked the most are: - the story - the rhythm and pacing of your writing - the language that you used - the words used in Venice's perspective. If anything, I feel like her character's the most vivid. You can tell by the words she used and sentences she weaved what kind of person she was. - the fluff and romance and sex uhuh! Hope you write more stories and make people feel a lot of feelings and think a lot of thoughts haha! Congratulations!"
