What is your opinion?
Dark Magic
"A Realistic and Clever Story. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"
Magic of reading
"I enjoyed reading this book. Thank you so much. Looking forward to more."
My two cents
"I could not finish the story. Plot idea is great but I hope this was just your first draft. Needs a lot of clean up in grammer and style. I found it jumps around a bit and things described that I found didn't need to be. Character development was good. I would like to read more of your work though so keep writing."
Given up
"It looks like a four year old wrote this. There were loop holes and all sorts of mess ups when it came to writing. I couldn't even get past two chapters. And because of that I have to give this the lowest scoring ever. And I'm not one to just drag a story through the mud because of a couple spelling errors. It's just that it was hard to read and when it came to the fights it was like who is fighting what and with what. I'm sorry but I had to give up while reading it."
your story 1
"hi, I really like your plot and the idea that "doing/having magic" seems to be a bad thing in your world (usually it's something special and good) so that makes your story different indeed, however.. I stopped reading at chapter 4 mostly because the fangirling and fanservice makes your story go from all-ages and gender to: girls between 11-14 y.o. I don't know what kind of group you wanted to appeal, but if it is girls between 11 till 14 y.o. then you are on the right path. Furthermore - I have to be honest - I often skipped paragraphs because the stuff you were discribing were irrelevant. Like describing a room doesn't do much in the story. The story was overall obvious. I also suggest that you let someone do a "test reading" because I see some mistakes (not that it bothered me). Don't take it the wrong way please I don't mean to be rude, this is just my opinion."
